Abandoned mine

Discussion in 'Reach Race Maps' started by sarascorpia, Jan 27, 2011.

  1. JewishBagel xx

    JewishBagel xx Forerunner

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    I'm about to download it. I'll post again soon when I get done testing it. I'll rate it as well.

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    Enjoyment
    I enjoyed it as much as any others I enjoy. It's a map I could play over and over again with my friends, but after atleast 3 matches, it would become boring to me and possibly towards the friends I play with.
    With that said, I'll give it a 7/10



    Balance
    The ending line I don't really like. I wish you could make it where you know that you'll turn instead of having the checkpoint completely guide you through the small opening in the rocks. I would like to see more blockades on the turns, sometimes even if you drift, it still flies you off,no matter how slow or fast you go.
    With this said, I'll give a 6/10



    Durability
    There seems to be places where killzones aren't in effect. I fell off twice near the end, and near a turn and I could just drive along until finally a killzone would hit me. I would probably tinker with that and make a v2.
    With this said, I give a 5/10



    Aesthetics
    You seemed to keep the theme of the track sticking. I would probably put some light source in there to maybe make the whole map nearly as green as the mine trail? That may just be me but I'm only here in opinion.
    7/10



    Originality
    I've seen few of these that I play for fun with my friend use the mine. That there, gives you full originality.
    10/10






    Enjoyment Rating:7/10
    Balance Rating:6/10
    Durability Rating:5/10
    Aesthetics Rating:7/10
    Originality Rating:10/10


    Overall Rating: 7/10
     
    #21 JewishBagel xx, Mar 16, 2011
    Last edited: Mar 16, 2011
  2. Eightball

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    Nice racetrack. Although, I'm not sure about its size. It looks to small to pass people. Idk if that's not a problem. Anyways, this is definetly unique and creative, I haven't seen anyone make a cave-type race track. I like race tracks, but I'm no good at making them. This one looks smooth and neat. Good work.
     
  3. sarascorpia

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    nice rating thats gr8 and it gives me great ideas for my secound version in that i will make the track longer and use the green special effect thing you said put a ton more killzones in and make the ending more smooth thanks again for your feedback
     

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