Hye guys, been a while since i was last here but anyways, I'll just get to the point. I started making minecraft videos and here is the first oone i did. I hope you'll enjoy it and subscribe if you did. I have another on my channel and more coming out in the next couple weeks. YouTube - Minecraft Mob Trap, Giant Tree, etc..
I REALLY like that Water Valley and how you built like all that crap under it. The video was kinda unbearable. No offense, but your voice was actually going to put me to sleep. It was so monotone and it sounded like you didn't want to show anyone this stuff.
Soemone already gave me the same advice on minecraftforum.net and i have filmed a couple lets plays with more emotion and less ummm uhhs in them.
Please, don't say "umm". Know exactly what you wanna show us and a rough idea what you wanna say. Most of the traveling was unnecessary. Your lake, underwater farm, waterfall, and mob trap were kinda cool. Most of us could care less about your mines and what's in your chests. You'd turn a 14 minute "make me wanna commit suicide for watching this" video into a bearable 5 minute video showing the highlights.
I liked it for what it was. Pretty cool just seeing what players work on on their own computers. I for one am beginning to miss mobs and TNT and massive useless projects lol Servers are pretty picky and don't let you mess with those things.