I'm pretty happy with this one, please tell me what you think. All feedback is appreciated Oh and sorry about not fixing my other ones. I'm terrible at fixing little details just because I mix the layers a lot when I make these, so I plan on just making new graphics instead of correcting the old ones.. but i still listen to feedback, so yeah, just leave a comment or something. stock v2
The focal is split between the swastika and the zombie. There is pretty bad flow, try to make all lines and directions that things are looking go more or less in the same direction (towards the focal in most cases). You haven't blended the elements in. You have to try make the characters and elements feel like they belong with the background. The link to the stock doesnt work. There isn't really any work done with lighting here, all the light appears to be coming from nowhere in particular, which takes away from the piece in general. The colours dont really work together, the purpleish pink doesnt work with the shades of gray. Look at some tutorials. I know its an old line, everyone spouts it off at every turn, but tutorials ARE very useful. I liked a few of the ones in our tutorial database myself, and have used them on occasion, a fairly good one that I find is pretty detailed and gives a fair bit of good advice is Miraj's Disintegrate tutorial, it goes over gradient maps, blending, smudging and a bunch of stuff. Also, what program do you use for this? Oh and I know what you mean about fixing mistakes in your works, often it really is not possible to change elements after a while.
i liked it. A+ however... dude above me is right, the color scheme doesn't fit. Seeing as your using grey, why not use a monochromatic color scheme? EDIT: red and black colors would get my DL