Well, I think I might have actually made something mildly cool. The white lines look kinda weird, and I could have fixed them, but I thought it was neat how it appeared to be "ripping" the piece. Constructive criticism? Stock is here.
The flow is contradictory, the light given by the lens flare goes in an opposing direction to the curve of the light given by the stage light. Color schemes contradict, the warmth of the background clashes with that of the cool light from the stage light. The white lines around the stock and its projection create a feeling that the piece has been only given a bit of thought, as it looks messy to leave things like that in place. If the desired effect was a ripping effect, it would be better to develop it rather than leave the couple of pixels around the edges. Also, along with that is that it doesnt blend with the background. The focal isnt very well defined, its hard to tell what you should be looking at.