I think the first is a bit too blurry, and the "i"s aren't exactly in line. And the text isn't blended with the background. it's just kinda there :/ Otherwise, I really like the second one and the overall effects are just awesome. Nice job.
ill try and change up the text or remove it all together thanks and i was really happy with the second one also
I like the lighting you have going on in the first one. You've gotten a lot better since you've started.