this asymetric map has everything a slayer/swat enthusiest could want: big team spawns, 3 levels, weapons, crates, a cave, and... a circle! but i have only gotten to try it with a 1v1 so far. if anyone wants to test bigger, be my guest. but whaddaya think? Arrest sorry, but my render minutes are up and im broke so the best walkthrough i can offer is this video
hmmm were should i start. first off your thumbnail piucture isnt working. if your using image shack, its the link labled "Direct Link". Secondly almost every piece on the map is a "premade" building. im not saying you should never use premade buildings, but when thats all you use, its pretty hard to call your map original. and thirdly i think that map is a little cramped in a lot of places. also it isnt very plesent to look at. But that all being said, dont get dicuraged from forging. Evryone has there first expierement map. You showed a few good ideas in your layout, so obviosly you know what a map is suposed to look like. Better luck on your next one!
I see a little more than just the pre-made buildings, but without some other pictures, I can't tell exactly what is going on. Get a few other shots that show some more of the layout and some of the structural things you created. As it stands now, I'm afraid people may pass your map up and there could be something very interesting that's not being conveyed about it yet.