UNSC saragoa

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  1. Posiedon Sniper

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  2. BiaxialEMPEROR

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    Okay... Some pictures would be nice, and I do believe the UNSC Grafton was the one that was destroyed. And I'm also pretty sure it was "Saratoga".
     
  3. Posiedon Sniper

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    sorry i din't do much research but i'm pretty sure that it was Saragoa i will check though also i am trying to put on some pictures right now


    woops you were right my bad i will change that
     
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  4. BiaxialEMPEROR

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    No problem, man.

    Just took a look. A pretty decent map overall, but it could use some work. I like some Ideas(like the drop pod holders) but the ship feels a bit too big and empty on the inside. and a tip for shipbuilding: teleporters kinda break the immersion. I've seen many good looking ships fail on the inside because they use teleporters to connect a few rooms together, rather than a hallway. Also the engines are way too small.
     
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  5. Posiedon Sniper

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    I no but i had some design flaws and as i said i couldn't really make them with hallways so i had to use that teleporter as for the engines I had the exact same if I had had more money and supplies I would have made the engines like they should look and filled the frigate more.

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    I put on pictures :)
     
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  6. BiaxialEMPEROR

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    My suggestion would be to compress certain sections of the ship. Don't make any rooms any bigger than they need to be. An example of this is that the space above the hangar could easily be compressed into a series of rooms on one floor.
     
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    thanks for the advice. I think I will do that if I ever make another one or edit this one.
     
  8. BiaxialEMPEROR

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    Just remember to build from the inside-out man. It gets harder to build a ship if you make it a box and then try to cram as much stuff inside that box as you can.
     

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