No offense to you good sir, and I know its your first map so I'm going to say that it looks like you hardly tried to copy its shape, or at least that's all I can see from the one picture. I mean its alright and its nice that you made a mac cannon and all but the aesthetics are kind of........disappointing, I don't mean to be an ass, but this is what it looks like:Spirit of Fire
well i wasnet trying to copy it just wanted the name ok ok it`s not the best ever but its my first still please download and comment!!
I like the features, but the ship looks very box like. You should add some sort of attractive shape to your ship.
its your first map so hey, kudos and welcome but people are going to judge this with the same level as the other maps, because when playing customs with friends, people will only play the very best. as for help, check out the aesthetic section, and behold in awe ,the unsc ships people are making, then compare to yours, it very bleak. Aswell, people tend to download maps more likely(sometimes) if their are several pics, cant tell a lot
I would recommend making your own UNSC ship instead of trying to copy another (especially one the size of the Spirit of Fire) There are a couple of classes of ships that are roughly 100 meters in length and nobody can say yet what they should or should not look like. Try going that route.
I'm gonna download just to see how the gameplay is..Cause Aesthetically its disappointing but hey its your 1st map.YAY! Most ppl (including myself) are too lazy to even make one...