herotic coridoors

Ok some advice, the map could be pure gold but who would get past the tiny pictures and numerous grammatical errors on this page to find out. Please embed more/larger pictures, don't forget an overview shot and a weapons list couldn't hurt.

 

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EDIT: I believe you are looking for the word "Heretic."

EDIT 2: On-Topic: I agree with DMM White, this map doesn't look bad at all, it looks pretty decent and is in fact a good start. Also, can you please add a Weapons Lists?

 

You mean "Heretic Corridors"?
Try Google Chrome, it has a spell checker.

Its actually not an awful map, its a good start. You're missing a "1x1 Tall" on one side of the central doorway, by the way.

There are 2 problems which shouldn't be very difficult to fix.
The first, where are all your spawn points? We've collected lots of information on spawn points over the past few years and 16 is not enough.
The second problem is the map has just 1 path, 1 way in and out of each base and 1 doorway between red and blue side.

But its nice to see that path isn't just 1 long corridor, there is room for a bit of movement.

Also, you really didn't need to waste your budget on the "battle" outside.

 

you know it's spelled 'corridors' right? in case you didn't you do now.
as for the map, it seems very open, maybe try to add more cover, but I don't know because I haven't played it.

tip: try a bigger image size and ALWAYS post an overview.