UNSC Luminescence

Discussion in 'Reach Aesthetic Maps' started by jura293, Dec 20, 2010.

  1. jura293

    jura293 Forerunner

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    Drop pods and spawn
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    Captain's quarters
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    Barracks
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    Bridge
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    Vehicle depot

    My next ship! Once again growing in size, its my first frigate and i'm proud to present it! It took me a long time so please pay attention the the details. Once again, its just for show or you can make you own game type. Enjoy!
     
  2. ZipZapZop

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    Not bad. There are some thing I find weird though. The barracks are friggen' tiny, and the vehicle bay is huge. Unless you've got like 3 men a bed, you won't have enough to man the vehicles. And, if it's a UNSC ship, why are there Shade Turrets on it? They're Covenant, not human you know.
    /rant

    Anyways,

    Now that I'm done ranting, it's a good map. I like the vehicle drop bay idea, and you implemented drop pods into it, I'm impressed.


    8/10.
     
  3. jura293

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    Thanks. I prefer smaller barracks, but the shade turrets are there because turrets were underpowered for such a large ship and tanks wouldn't fit. I'm glad you like it. :)
     
  4. goop

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    Seems to me like a lot of materials are used ineffectively. You could dramatically increase the size of the ships if you used proper parts. Perhaps you would be interested in a co-forge? I could show you how to make your maps a lot bigger. I do like the shape of the ship but the size is absolutely tiny. The ship is barely large enough to qualify for a drop ship. The size just ruins the map if you ask me. On a larger scale this could have made a great ship.

    Overall
    5/10
     
  5. PublicToast

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    Could you post a picture of the outside? The thumbnail is too small to see smaller details.

    As for what I saw, I honestly don't like ships with the Colosseum windows on them. Not really your fault, it just looks odd to me. You might want to switch them for Colosseum walls. Good interior though.

    5 1/2 out of 10
     
    #5 PublicToast, Dec 24, 2010
    Last edited: Dec 24, 2010

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