Something Beautiful

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  1. DeathMcGunz

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    New series from DeathMcGunz!

    A young couple fight to survive, and stay together.

    Here it is!

    Note: This was a *****. Really. Beyond my own comprehension. So many things went awry during the making of this, which is why it's not coming out until now.

    Also, this is completely differently from "Forger". It's not a straight comedy. It's a horror, drama, comedy, action hybrid thing. It's all of them mixed into a pot and hopefully you will all love to smoke it. If not, then I'll probably self induce a coma.

    Like, favorite, comment and subscribe.

    P.S- I have another series (inorite?) planned out that I'm going to make a trailer for next week. It's about Machinima, like, it's that simple. Now, what I would like to know is that, after viewing this and forger, what do you want to see next week? Either:

    a) "Something Beautiful"
    b) "Forger"
    c) "New series"

    Either way the trailer is coming out next week. I'd love to know what you guys want to see, because without you, I'm nothing.
     
  2. Katanga

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    I absolutely loved the first part. With all the radio broadcasts. Set the atmosphere really well, and told the story in quite an interesting way.

    However, I would have loved it if you'd have kept with that theme. The comedy element didn't feel right after such a serious introduction, in my opinion. Seperately, it might have been alright, but together I don't feel it worked. Maybe seperate the ideas, so a serious one and a more lighthearted one?
     
  3. DeathMcGunz

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    That seems to be everyone problem with this, so I think I'm going to tune down the comedy and just focus on the drama.
     

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