southern pride

Discussion in 'Reach Competitive Maps' started by sulligentf12, Nov 18, 2010.

  1. sulligentf12

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    this is the second map ever in forge world ive only got on screen shot so far the others aint been uploaded to bnet

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  2. Jflood

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    you might want to describe it a bit more because I have no idea what this map is about and the only thing the pictures tell me is that there is a sniper a sword and a rocket launcher right next to each other with a purple light
     
  3. Flywheel1

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    Is it me, or are you going for the shape of a Gretsch guitar?
     
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    Setting physics on weapons to fixed or phased has some buggy side effects
     
  5. sulligentf12

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    yeah i think they some bugs to fix in it but thats one thing i was trying to get feed back on from people who play on it. idk what kinda shape it is lol thats just how it turned out but its only my second one tho. the other one is called showdown maybe yall could check it out to

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    i just changed all the weapons to phased
     
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  6. Spicy Forges

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    Honest criticism: Its too small, it has 3 power weapons right next to each other and there is no real design.

    You have $10,000 budget. You appear to have barely scraped the $9,000 barrier. Make it bigger and better, with new designs and walkways, more cover, spawns and less power weapons in one room.
     
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    It looks somewhat neat, but I fear it is wayyy too small for standard games.

    P.S. War Eagle.
     
  8. sulligentf12

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    i didnt make it for big matches or for alot of player to be on themap at one time tho it mainly consist of team swat n team slayer n rumble pit

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    theres four differet sections to it it aint just two little rooms
     
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  9. MattKestrel

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    It's a nice room, to be fair.
     
  10. sulligentf12

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    they just going by pictres and thats not all there is to that map its a fairly size map with four different parts in it that u cant see in the pictures
     
  11. DMM White

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    Although I agree that people shouldn't review maps from just the screenshots, I also think that you're screenshots should give a good representation of your map.

    I gave you the benefit of the doubt. Perhaps you map was good, but your bad screenshots were letting it down.

    Well, sorry, but the map itself is a lot bigger but there's a list of things wrong with it, that list would pretty much cover the basics of map making, so it would be pointless me trying to fit it all in to 1 post when there are 3 years worth of topics, tutorials, guides and existing maps to use as reference for Halo alone.

    You just need to put more thought in to your map. I'll get you started: one problem with your map is the only way to get around is via the limited number of teleporters.
     
  12. sulligentf12

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    yeah well i mean yall can complain and say what u want but i could care less anymore because to me for it to be my second map ever n forge i like it pretty good.
     
  13. Darkm2021

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    Also the single walkway leading to one platform. It's a death trap I tell ya. I smell camping.
     
  14. DMM White

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    Beauty is in the eye of the beholder.

    You can believe a map you make is perfect but if its no fun for anyone else then its a bad multiplayer map. You can't have multiplayer with 1 person.
     
  15. sulligentf12

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    i have friends that i play with so i have people who play on map since yall think this one is so shitty then maybe yall need to lookat the other one
     

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