Spartan Mart

Discussion in 'Reach Aesthetic Maps' started by Stopex, Oct 25, 2010.

  1. Stopex

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    This map is based off of real life "Target"
    There is no actuall game mode for this map, so just use forge OR slayer.

    Whole View-ISH (Buy a cone now for HALF PRICE!)
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    Check Stands (Don't STEAL THE CONES! Pay for them...)
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    Pharmacy (Health Packs!)
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    GOT MILK? (No.... We have spartan Abilities though)
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    WIN THE CAR OF YOU'RE DREAMS (My dream car IS A TANK!)
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    The Storage room (TOYS YAAAAAAY!!!!!)
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    Hope you make machinimas!
     
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  2. Biggles2

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    This is really well made, not to mention a great original idea, I really like it. I especially like how you've made the shelves and the check stands, it really does give it a great feel of realism. The only thing I would say is that the pedestal where the warthog is standing on and the circle around it look slightly sloppily made in a couple of parts, but those are easily fixable.

    Great map, great concept, well executed with only a few flaws. I could definatly see this being used in a machinima series.
     
  3. Stopex

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    Thanks for the good feedback, I was originally creating this map for friends and myself but, Hey I should share the map. They all liked it. They thought they were actually at "Target; Wal-Mart; etc." And Yes the circle is pretty sloppy, I kind of got lazy around making that. Before there was a "Rocket-Warthog" placed there.
    I had 2 More check Stands in that area. my friend (Fissix) Who'm was the first to see the map/watch me make it/Give me ideas pitched that there should be a "Win The Car of YOU'RE DREAMS." So... I incorporated a vehicle into the store.
     
  4. D4ni3l G

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    Haha, great idea, and nicely forged too. I agree that i'd be a pretty good infection map it it were maybe a little bigger. Love how you've used a grid to look like a shiny tiled floor.
     
  5. Stopex

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    Actually I thought I should remake this map but slightly bigger, and more shelves.
    I'll have to figure out a way of how to make it without it frame rate lagging.
    The Grid was going to be taken out due to Fissix (The guy who was telling me how real it looked) saying that the grid color makes him feel like hes in the ocean.....
    LOL hes an idiot!!!!
     
  6. Grif2200

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    *Kat, we have a clean-up on aisle 5. That's Kat, clean-up on aisle 5*

    Very well made and good use of items, well done!

    If my capture card still worked I would definatley use this in some sort of Spartan Supermarket sitcom or such.
     
  7. I Am Rampage

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    Good map, Thought I was at the super market.
     
  8. Marth234

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    That looks awesome! It'd be cool if it worked for infection too tho
     
  9. Stopex

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    I was originally going to make it a infection map but, I really didn't want to take the time to set up spaws for zombies. IM LAZY!!! LOL
     
  10. 4shot

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    Since when were Target stores this small? You probably couldn't make a map the size of a real Target, but still... This just seems a bit too much of a budget saver. You should use more of your budget.
     
  11. Stopex

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    Im OUT OF MONEY!!!!!!
     
  12. 4shot

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    What? You must not have shown screenshots of the entire map, then. It looks too small for a $10k budget.
     
  13. xXDEADB0LTXx

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    Great map. Me and my friend downloaded it, and we actually changed a lot of the features to make it more our own "variant" of your map. Like, we took out the warthog and its stand, the lights, and the expensive "toys" in storage, and we got around $2500, so we decided to build more shelves, another room in the pharmacy, an "off limits" area in the storage, and tons of little details.

    We also built an outside landing pad and a few hornets on the island so that the other team has to fly to the store instead of just spawning there. There are 3 hornets and each one has its own landing pad. We also put shield doors on the entrance and exit so that you can only enter through the entrance and exit through the exit.

    I'm not gonna try and steal the map or anything, we basically just made it because we were bored. Maybe if your interested I could post some pictures of what we changed. Anyhow, again it's a good map, but I feel you coulda spent some more time (like we did) adding some more features.. :)
     
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  14. Stopex

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    I'd love to check out the map, just message me on LIVE
    Gamertag: Stopex
     
  15. BiaxialEMPEROR

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    Hi there. I've been working on a machinima lately and I was actually wondering If i could use a slightly modified version of the map for my video.
     
  16. Stopex

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    Please, Do what you need to make the map "Machinima-able"
    :D
     
  17. JDB95

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    The warthog stand looks very sloppy, the rest is nice but I am not sure if I like the small railing on the one open fridge door. The map overall looks like it might have a ton of lag but you can correct me if I am wrong. Overall it is pretty nice and a very nice idea I love the storage room :)!
     
  18. Stopex

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    Yeah, I kind of rushed to finish the warthog stand area but, hey I did my best.
    also there is no Frame rate whatso ever.
     

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