Top Ten - Needs Moar Feedback

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  1. Oli The G

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    YouTube - Halo Reach: Top Ten SNIPES

    this is my latest top ten video - snipes. I could do with some feedback on it. Can you give me any info as to quality of the clips or stuff like that? Feel free to sub aswell!

    thanks!
     
  2. Monolith

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    I feel like you replayed the clips too much. I'd say you should do it 2 at the most... 3 if it's an amazing clip or needs a lot of explaining. Also, if you're going to repeat a clip.. it's good that you did it from different angles and all.. but don't replay the entire clip. Especially the last one. I liked it, but it wasn't much better the 2nd time viewing from overhead.

    Also, the music. I think you could've changed it up. There's the top 10 series (forget what it's called) that ALWAYS uses Halo music, especially the H2 theme. It's just overplayed.. try something new like .. well, that's your personal choice.

    All in all, it wasn't the best. The clips were pretty sweet, the sounds was okay, the intro and transitions were decent... so I'll give you a 7/10
     
  3. Oli The G

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    thanks for that, thats a great insight. I don't normally show that many sides, but for a snipers clip I felt it made it much clearer.

    Feel free to post suggestions on the next set of music aswell!
     

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