MX-A7 Dropship

Discussion in 'Reach Aesthetic Maps' started by Belly391, Sep 30, 2010.

  1. Belly391

    Belly391 Ancient
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    I was trying to make a crashed pelican dropship for a map im making, but as you can see it didnt come out like that, and thus, the MX-A7 was born.

    Now im not the best forger in the world but i do try so and suggestions on IMPROVING it are welcome.

    On the the screenies...

    Overview
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    Front of the ship
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    Back of the ship
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    Dropped supplies
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    Interior with me for size comparison
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    Thats prety much it. Anyone is welcome to dl it and build a map from it if the wish. I dont mind.

    Peace Out
    Belly


    UPDATE: I have made the ship slightly longer and reuploaded it. here is the new link.
    http://www.bungie.net/Stats/Reach/FileDetails.aspx?fid=4665951&player=Belly391
     
    #1 Belly391, Sep 30, 2010
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  2. Combat P3nguin

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    Your only using a tiny bit of the bunget you could of had 5 of these or so. Your drop ship seems short and stubby, try making the ship look longer and try lowering the roof a bit on your ship, at the moment your ship looks like a small cargo ship.


    Things you need to improve on:

    1. Make the ship longer without the feeling of it been short and stubby.
    2. You have a huge buget left use it somehow.
    3. If you want try make a gametype out of it.
     
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  3. Belly391

    Belly391 Ancient
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    im not making a huge map. just this area for now. i will make it a little longer now though. it does look rather stubby
     
  4. Combat P3nguin

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    thats all you really need to do is just make it not short and stubby, maybe add other ships if you want.
     
  5. D4ni3l G

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    yeah, its basic. Don't get me wrong, it's a nice bit of forging, but theres plenty of leftover budget to play around with, maybe build something that it has crashed into around it, like a tower.
     
  6. Belly391

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    ok. lets get this straight here people. ITS A PIECE OF FRICKIN' SCENERY. im not going to use up the whole map budget on a little area like that.

    update: i have made the compartment a little long and adden a turret but i may take that away. i will change links when have a chance
     
    #6 Belly391, Sep 30, 2010
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  7. Atik

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    Maybe you can build one in the air. Show us what they are like flying.

    Any callsign ideas? Eagle or Seagull would be cool.
     
  8. Belly391

    Belly391 Ancient
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    Links have been updated
     
  9. Silentsniper

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    try making them in the sky too cause id like to see how it looks

    but for a brick it flew pretty good
     
  10. zim

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    Hey can you update your link? Its not working. By the way I like the drop ship kinda reminds me of the drop ship in starship troopers
     

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