Brantick

Im going to be brutally honest here; you've placed a bunch of different objects randomly in between two bases which are each a single object. You're map has no focal point (a central structure or a sweet base) or aesthetic features of any kind. This sounds harsh. I know, but its all constructive criticism. If you can't take it thats your loss.

Now onto what can be improved. When designing a map you want start with some sort of clever base design, a sweet central structure or some sort of focal point that will make your map stand out. This idea that you come up with will be what you're map is based around. Once you have this idea you can build onto it.
For example, my maps always start with a single thing. Gyroscope began with the idea of giant, intertwined rings. Night Shift started with the idea of spawning humans on the high ground and elites down in a little outpost. A map called Final Stop from Halo 3 began with a train/train station.
You see where I am getting at. A focal point will make your map stand out from the rest.

I hope my (wise ) words help you out. Oh and you have actually done something which most people don't: you've had an actual game on your map before you posted it. Bonus marks!
Keep forging.

 

I agree with this post. Consider structures that could possibly connect the two bases, such as walkways or tunnels. This will help to create a flow and connection between the bases. If you do not want direct connections between the structures then simply make the field of design less random and more organized in its design. Diversifying and adding to the bases can help greatly.

Good luck in your future forging endeavors!