Here is my first Reach map, Revolution. An almost 3 minute long rollercoaster, with jumps, turns, and an abondoned village theme to it. Downlaod and enjoy! Starting Cave First Two Hills Turn+ Drop to 2nd Turm Straightaway through Village Abandoned Building Broken Bridge Abandoned Building First Spiral Second Spiral Through The Cave Hill and Turn Hill Back to Start Revolution! Link to youtube video: YouTube - Halo Reach Rollercoaster
Looks pretty decent, some criticisms: 1. Shield doors. Like what you did with the drop, very creative, did NOT like the shield door gates at the first few hills. Seem to slow you down too much and lessen the fun. 2. Could have done a better job with the spiral, because of the large gaps between the pieces on the outside edge seem to be a way to easily get stuck in, forcing people to the inside edge. You don't want that in a RACE with MULTIPLE people. Otherwise, good map, nice creativity, would like to see you make it so people are required to navigate the broken bridge.
thanks man, and yeah i made the hills way before i knew how to use precision with the left stick, so there was bumps and i added the one way shields, and the spiral haha yeah, but i rlly wanted it to go over the rock cliff there
Dude, this is amazing. I played for a bit with my friends, and it's really smooth, fun, etc. Some of the hills and turns need some banking, or maybe that's just me. A few places, such as the loop thing before the cave, could be slightly widened(if possible). I'll give a solid 4/5.