My computer is fixed now, so I made this to start brushing off my skills. Inspired by Eminem's Not Afraid.
I love the text as it starts to look kind of broken as it moves to the right. Aslo agree with just defy, get rid of the I am not afraid. Awesome song, btw.
Eh.... I don't know why but the single color makes me tick. Eminem > lil wayne Vote now to get lil wayne expelled from this planet PLEASE do it for the children
I like the idea of the text a lot. "I'm not afraid" needs to go. You could use some more effects or something to make it look less flat. The text distracts from the focal, but I can deal with that in this case. I personally dont love the monotonal color scheme, but its not horrible. The crinkled paper in the background looks kind of meh to me, maybe get a cool stock and manip it a little to fit in. I don't know if those are like lightning bolts or tree branches but they are extremely low quality and should go too, honestly. Also needs lighting pretty bad :/. Keep it up.