this is sorta the direction of the flow... there's points that contradict it which take away from it. i know its not needed but imo its nice to have. i like effects except it would be cooler if they sorta wrapped around the focal. i would have kept the stuff out of behind the building because you cut around them AFTER blurring. and that messes up the depth nice lighting and dec colors.
Too bury on the left side I think. I like everything else except for the huge line on the lower left side.
True, but instead of being crowded this one lacks effect, the background is too prominent and distorted, and is still bleached out the render is over sharpened and hidden by how bright and faded the whole sig is. Keep in mind, this is my opinion. And I liked the effects in the first one. EDIT: Oh, and the text is absolutely horrid.