Angel's ARE REAL

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by super, Aug 17, 2010.

  1. super

    super Forerunner

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    comment please.
     
  2. Mace

    Mace Old Tyme
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    Good blending, I like v1 better. v1 has better depth, great depth btw.
     
  3. Frag Man

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    Someone was fed some cake. (Points for the person who gets the pun)

    Blending is okay.

    Focal needs sharpening.

    Flow is fine, but the white lines are contradicting.

    Effects are fine.

    Depth needs work. Blur the objects in the far back.

    Overall: 3/5. It has more good points than bad, but there are still some bad that need fixing. Especially the render. Needs sharpening.
     
  4. Kung Fu Jesus

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    To me the problem with the focal is biggest, but not bad.
     

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