Wow this really simple but nice. Seems to be something different from your norm? The only thing that I dont like is the faint double text behind the actual text.
I'd say remove the text. It really doesn't add to the message for me, and I feel better when I let myself discover the meaning of the loading bar and interpret it as I see it.
Id say make the bar a little more past 65%, right now it looks like showing half and half Also take out the first line of text, it seems a little much