yeah i could probably put more into them. thanks for the comment if you see anything wrong in a particular sig don't hesitate to say it.
1 - Work on flow. 2 - Position your focal more naturally - Work on flow as well. - Work on lighting, don't just boldly place it wherever you want, and lower the opacity or set it to soft light. - Pick more suitable effects 3 - Colors are unappealing - Effects seem random 4 - Add a light source. 5 - It would have looked better if you still used the style of the first one. 6 - Once again, focal placement... 7 - Focal placement. - Get rid of those rings. 8 - The effects do not match your focal at all IMO. - Sharpen the render. 9 - Erase that big yellow triangle. - What's with the black smoke? - Text is too big and don't tilt the "Bang". Actually, this sig wouldn't really work out with text. 10 - Weird. lol Personally, I like your newest one the best.
I really like all of them, but my favorite is the third. Could you maybe make a similar sig about Halo Reach for me? it could help you train.
@rabbit thanks for the CnC first time i actually really got some, however i don't really understand what is wrong with the focal placement could you elaborate. @flashpoint POST A STOCk i might do it for it you. i'm currently working on some requests right now so it might take a while to get it to you. A fun fact all of these are requests.
Specifically on the second and seventh ones (I take back my focal comment on the sixth), there's just no good reason to do it. Plus, it doesn't look good unless you can really execute it well. Take the sixth one as an example, the focal is slanted, but it is more well-suited than the other two. Personally, I'd prefer not slanting any of my focals, but that's just me. No problem, man.
First of all, these are all great. However, some of them could use some gradient maps. Most of them, however, are great without them. Most of your sigs got out of focus though. Use the blur tool more often.
No offense, but you have no idea what you are talking about. First of all, flow is over rated. What he has for the first is fine. 4. The light source comes from behind. Quit abusing the freaking 300 pix white brush thing, its so un natural and bad. The only sigs that have bad focal placement is 1,2, and 5