My first real map. I've used forge before, but I'd never attempted a real map before. download link: http://www.bungie.net/Online/Halo3UserContentDetails.aspx?h3fileid=117185627
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i don't see much weapons on the map, actually the only things i see are 2 spikers, overshield, invisibility and a banshee. not much cover either, anyone who gets the banshee kinda controls the game. but since i dont have much commenting experience ill leave the comments to the more experienced commenters edit: im not sure but is there a sniper on the left of the 2nd pic?
Banshees are a difficult vehicle to include in a small map. To balance this, you'll need more cover and weapons that can easily take it out. But since its in the skybubble the pilot has all the room in the world. This will make it extremely difficult to destroy it. You've also got a lot of open space in the middle. The banshee would run rampant in this open space. Lasty, in the future try merging as many things as possible. Merging helps everything stay very smooth and will do wonders for gameplay.
This map needs alot of work. - The map is waaaaay to open an give no cover to the players - The map is unclean/unneat - The map has a boring design - There are barely any weapons - The banshee is too over powered because there is nothign that can destroy it and there is no cover for the players to get awat from the banshee.
there is a sword a rocket a splaser a BR two spikers, invis, overshield and a sniper. i can see the lack of cover as a problem. edit:JPeloquin218: the design being boring is your own opinion.i didn't make its specifically for you, and so if you don't like it, that's a personal problem. I also don't see where unneatness comes in. i wouldn"t say it looks amazing at all, but saying it is completely un -neat is wrong, at least in my opinion. I would show you an un-neat map, but i don"t think giving a link to another persons page and saying "this is bad" is very nice, and is probably against the rules. although i have to agree with you on the map being to open and lacking cover, but, what you said, and i quote, "an give no cover to the players", is wrong. there is cover, however small and far apart it may be.
The fact of the matter is that this is an un-neat map. The sad thing about forge nowadays is that without merging, ghost merging, and interlocking, a map isn't up to the worlds high standards. Unless you can show us I see no interlocking or merging in any way. And as for him saying it's boring, I kinda think it is as well. The idea is very overused, and with a Banshee flying around, with little cover, you will be killed very fast. That can make a map very boring. Sorry if my post sounds a little mean, I'm not a mean person.
picture 2: the whole in the ground near the front of the picture. thats it, but it is something. and i've already given my argument as to why it isnt un-neat, so i guess we will just have to agree to disagree on that point but i still want you to know that im not convinced thats its amazingly neat or anything..and no, it didnt seem mean. do you suggest i simply take out the banshee? im proabably going to remake this anyway. i like it whether anyone else does or not, so whatever.