Facepalm -.- I'll CnC though. Flow is really messed up. Keep it going in one direction. Def work on lighting. Work on depth. Work on blending. Good focal.
Text feels odd, and oddly placed. Also, the effects are a little over powering, so if you turn them down, I think the sig would be a whole lot better.
Thanks for the CnC guys, but my computer has been dead since I posted this up, and therefore I can't do any Photoshop until it's fully fixed. I'm about 80% of the way through. Also, I think the .psd was lost during the epic crash. My backup didn't save anything post-this piece, so idk.