"My Lord, your helmet is cutting through your shoulder pauldrons it's so sharp..." At first I wuz liek whoa then I wuz liek hmm... then i wuz lyk ewww! In all seriousness now, you have a lot of good stuff in here. The problem is that it's not all good together. This sig would be better off without the weird colored pixely crap sliding off of him, and although I think it's cool that you tried something not usually seen on FH GnA, they just look gross with the rest of the sig. Colour. There are some colored lines and the text has like 3 colors in it. Everything else is one more color. I think when you title a tag like that it really lets us down when it's not actually that colorful. (Save that squiggly shizzle.) Lots of potential, too much mix of styles.
^The font's also not my favorite thing in the world. And it looks too sharp, but maybe that's just me.
Test is raaally random, and blending is blegh. Do some serious cropping, make it a squaure sig. Also, you've made d.vada a wee bit to small.
Weird Flow, bad colors, and the black and white theme + color squiggles don't look well together. Lighting is good, effects are messy. Text doesn't fit well.
"Colour. There are some colored lines and the text has like 3 colors in it. Everything else is one more color. I think when you title a tag like that it really lets us down when it's not actually that colorful. (Save that squiggly shizzle.)" The point of the tag was to show that colour stands out beyond just black and white. If I had a bunch of random ass colours that didn't make sense, it'd look retarded. " effects are messy" Which effects? "and blending is blegh" ...I didn't do any blending... "Do some serious cropping, make it a squaure sig" Uh, Square sigs don't really exist. Then it'd be an avatar. And what's wrong with the dimensions?
If not a square, then reduce the width, and probably the height and/or add a nice border or something. The effects to the left and right alone aren't enough to keep the otherwise blank sides, and don't really compliment your render like they should, or your sig as a whole.
Which effects? You know, teh bright shiny things, most likley c4ds? ...I didn't do any blending... Smudging the render into the BG counts, bro. "Do some serious cropping, make it a squaure sig" Uh, Square sigs don't really exist. Then it'd be an avatar. Yeah, they do. And they aren't avatars. l2knowbreh And what's wrong with the dimensions? dead space, nothing is wrong with the dimensions.
I personally don't think the "dead space" exists. The focal point vader, takes up the left side, and the secondary focal, the text, takes up the left side. Which are the spots that people look at. And could you explain to me why the C4D's are messy? I don't see it.