Foundry Ausmine

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Competitive Maps' started by masterguyperson, Jul 4, 2010.

  1. masterguyperson

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    This is a map I made, NOTE: I updated the map on another profile, as I said before I would put the updated Tealbren map on Steaming bolts account (my alternate account) the original file is masterguyperson account.
    I will put updated maps on there, so don't think that I stole this map!
    Anyway, this is a map of the ruins of a castle (although, theres only one part that is damaged though) and it was turned into a battle field, camps were set up in the castle and out of opposing forces. Here is the link to download my map: Bungie.net : Halo 3 File Details

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  2. xDarklingx

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    I love the last pic. really nice structures you've got here. I also love the wall corner- walkway in the second pic. I can't help but feel that this is just a bit messy though. For example :
    . The window panels in the second last pic look messy and unnecessary
    . In the second pic on the left, the box on top should be merged to the one touching the floor.
    . Adding on to the the last point, the double boxes making up the main structure/s should be merged into the ground

    So they're just a few suggestions. I'm sure that grenades don't get stuck under the boxes like people say, but if you just do little things like that in your next map, more people will be hitting the download button I can assure you!

    So I haven't downloaded it because I don't have my xbox connected to internet right now, but i get a pretty good idea from the pics. I have one final question, what is happening over in the back tunnels of this map, are they blocked off? I think maybe you should take a picture to help explain. Other than those few minor things, great map, great effort, great structures, great score! 4/5
     
  3. masterguyperson

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    sorry for not replying so late, but anyway, yes, I do agree it is a bit messy, but this was made when I first started to get good at making maps, and make it strait, and the window panels in the screenshot you see, well it may look uneccesary, it prevents player from bumping when they walk over it. But yeah, my more recent maps are much more cleaner, check my map Tealbren, its a couple of posts down. And yes, the back is blocked
     
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  4. Mister man 1217

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    The map overall loks very neat so I will first give you that. I do feel that some parts feel too open frmt he Pictures so I will take a look in a Custom Game to see what it is all about.
     
  5. masterguyperson

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    Well whats not in the pictures is a boundry.
     
  6. PatchworkZombie

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    Hmm I take it this map was made before ghost merging because nothing is merged into the ground. You should probably get back in forge and touch this map up a little with some ghost merging. Plus something that bugs me is in the last pic the sniper tube looks really unneat. Maybe thats just me though.
     
  7. masterguyperson

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    Actually you can see pretty easy that in one of the pictures the are boxes in the ground, and don't judge before you download please.
     

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