Foundry Gluxx

this map needs moar ghosting and should be cleaned up

 

Good merging.. kinda sloppy interlocking..
This is for assassin? Theres pretty much 2 open sides with merged single boxes.. of course the assassin is going to camp in the middle of the map.. keep the map fair for both teams or for humans and zombies..
Good that you kept the map symmetrical.. but add more to the sides with the powerdrainer..

 

Yeah I agree with turtle, the interlocking is kinda sloopy. I don't like the random geomerged open single boxes you have laying around. You should put different cover up because those just arent looking very good sorry. Fix those a youve got a decent map. Also add weapons list please helps everyone see if the weapons are fair thanks.

 

the interlocking is very sloppy. i feel like i dont get a very good view of this map. pretty good job ghosting. just make sure you delete all the extras, it looks like you may have forgotten some,

 

Assassin = Slayer en français


I have yet to download it, so my review is not entirely valid, but the flow actually looks fairly decent. The scenery is choppy in some areas, but otherwise it looks very nice. If there's a way to the top of the center structure, I can't find it.

 

Your map layout is pretty unique, but it may be an idea like all others have said is to clean up your interlocking, your geo merging or ghost merging(one of the 2) are a lot better then your interlocking. When making a map take your time it's not a race make sure you have everything in the place where you want it to be. Also add a weapon and equipment list and also a description of the map, so people may have an idea on what gameplay will be like.



Just fix up your interlocking and a few geo and ghost merging spots to try get them as straight as you can and you should be fine.

 

If you could add some info on the weapons that would be better
and some action pictures. If you don't have any action pictures
maybe you should test it before posting it. Also like the others
said, it does look a little sloppy and there could be a lot of
camping in those buildings. Over all, good layout but maybe
make a V2 with more doors in the buildings for less camping. 8/10

 

Ummmmm..... What are you trying to say?
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Anyways, looks pretty good except for the emptiness and sloppy interlocks.

My suggestion: On the sides with the power drainers, add something like little ledges or something that would allow for a good view and would take up some space.

 

Hmm, I kind of appreciate you haven't made any maps before but personally I think this looks kind of small. Also I disagree with just ghost-merging a single box open upside down because it's not very imaginative and looks ugly.

Two powerdrain??!!11!
what madness is this??? ^_^