UNSC FIRELIGHT by shinyCircles77 OLD VERSION (With Pelican): Bungie.net : Halo 3 File Details DOWNLOAD: Bungie.net : Halo 3 File Details This is a frigate I made in forge. A made the frigate look more like The Dawn, but I had to remove the Pelican The Firelight landed in a forerunner desert in 2552. It is now a memorial to the UNSC. Okay, so here are the features: Hangar with 4 Warthogs, upper ship with 2 drop pods, weapon shelf, sliding Warthog door leading to the bridge, bridge with a MAC cannon, and a cannon on the frigate's top IF THE WARTHOG SLIDING DOOR ISN'T WORKING, THEN MELEE THE WARTHOG A FEW TIMES And now for some pics! The frigate The hangar The upper ship The sliding Warthog door The bridge Breaking the pallet and taking the powerup leads into: BOOM The Top Cannon Hope you guys like it! ~ shinyCircles77
thanks. the pics are working for me, but earlier the pics werent working ut they are now. --- oh btw can u rate it on bungie.net. you dont have to though
...its a liitle to big (thats what she said) but if your going to make a v2 clean the forging up and interlock the pieces to make it more compact
You got almost every feature of a ship in this map INCLUDING the pelican.. its just that its in a sloppy ish way.. Asthetics are .."expected to look nice and neat because gameplay isint important in asthetic maps.. its how they look. Interlocking more and adding alittle more neatness would give this map a really good review.
This map seems like it was very hastily built. A good tip would be to put as much time and effort into your maps as reasonably possible. It's better to put out a good map every month than it is to put out a sloppy, low-quality map every day. Also, I'd recommend you work more on the overall look and flow of the map. This one just feels very gimmicky, as if we should download it just for the warthog door regardless of the quality of the actual map.
Thanks for the feedback! So, you're saying it's good, but it's sloppy. I'll put in as much time as possible to interlock the objects, but how is it gimmicky? Oh, I took 3 days to make this map but that's not enough. Is 2 more days of making it neat and interlocking okay? Yeah, so I'll make this map cleaner and stuff
I wouldn't give yourself a time in which to make the map, just work on it every couple of days and once you finish just keep working on it, tweaking anything you don't like and fixing anything people have pointed out, personally I wouldn't release a map without spending at least a couple of weeks on it but everyone is different so it might not be the same for you. Also I recoment you check out barc0de and rifle's ships they both have some fantastic ships that will give you an idea of what you should be aiming for in terms of aesthetics AND they'll probably be able to give you much better advice then i can
I've seen the Journey's End ship by rifle. That's where I got the ramp leading to the upper ship style idea. --- I can make pretty good maps in a few hours. Creativity runs in my family (Dads a graphic designer, I'm good at Photoshop) I just love forge! --- I kinda based this map on Journey's End. Heh heh lol.
I think if u are going to improve this map u should make the wharthog flip door actualy works properly and I think u should put more vareity of weapons down otherwise it is one of the best maps I have ever seen