Dude, you're not really listening. Honestly, I think you cannot improve your skills unless you actually do start listening to our advice. - Stop with the slanting text. It would be better if it was placed near the focal, horizontally. - Your focal (image) placement is off. Drag it up some more, then a little to the left. - As for flow, well, you don't have any. The effects are going all over the place. Maintain one (sometimes two) direction for your effects in a balanced manner. PLEASE. LISTEN.
This is pretty much it but also, the text itself (font and color) is horrible. Black does not blend with the rest of the sig in anyway at all.