This is a step backwards.... The text sucks worse than your previous ones, with a terrible blue colour, no blending of text, and it seems completely randomly placed. The guy doesn't blend in the least, and the colours of the whole piece make this just...well not very good at all.
Reander is horrible and has nothing to do with army or air force. And isn't the mottos "It's not science fiction. It's what we do everyday."? Idk that may just be a slogan for adds though.
Well, you should probably teach him what we told you so he can get past the HORRIBLE text and no blending stage.
Army: Army Strong Marines: The Few, The Proud Navy: Accelerate Your Life Air Force: Cross Into the Blue