Seems a bit dull and uninteresting to me. The font getting cut off either side is also distracting. The grey/white fade at the top seems a bit forced, if that makes sense. The render in the background just seems to be sitting there with not much to do with the rest of the picture, like a cardboard cutout. Bottom line font is too far left aligned, should probably be centered in this instance.
Thanks for the honest crit, Red. If I do a V2, I'll take all of these into consideration. Any suggestion for blending in the render?