A new machinima I've been working on... YouTube - The Game Store - Trailer Not the greatest, but episode 1 will be great.' The series will continue for possibly 3 seasons, each consisting of 7-12 episodes. Enjoy!
Good things: - Choice of music, nice change from halo 3 soundtrack which everyone seems to use nowadays - Intro Sequence looked great IMO - Video Quality, I own a Hauppauge too so I know how amazing they are - Sound Quality of voices was decent Things to improve on: - Scripting, some of the lines could be tweaked a bit to sound more natural - Delivery of lines, the clarity of lines sometimes got lost near the end of a sentence [I had no idea what Chuck said at 2:42] I didn't find it very funny, but everyone has their own sense of humour, so it's not something you can improve on. Overall, it was decent but as you said it's just a trailer and the real episode will be better. Once you've established characters it'll be much easier to construct jokes around them based on their personalities and probably make episodes as a whole. Best of luck with this series, I'll keep an eye out for it!
Thanks for the feedback, replied in red. Episode 1 has some humor in it. This was generally an introduction to the characters, etc.