Hey this is a video I made. I'm going to start doing stuff like this now on YouTube. Tell me what you think. And yeah this is ZANDER1994. And I am officially back now that Halo Reach is on the prowl. YouTube- Rapist Horses!?
Certain parts were entertaining. Others, you just went to far with it, like the basketball part.. just one would of done it. At some parts you were being asked questions, and other parts it was like, who are you talking to? I dunno, I kinda liked it.
Agreed. Also, for the "Wendy" part, the way it played out was too unrealistic for common sense. I mean, most people know that you can't call a famous fast food place like that or McDonald's for food. If it were a pizza place or something it would've been better. Or, if it would've played out like You: I was thinking about you...wanna go out some time? ::wait:: You: Oh, okay. since you just finished saying how pimp-like you were. This isn't really an issue, but it could use some cleaning up. Specifically, having another "character" (whether that be another voice you do, or someone else entirely) asking a question here or there. For example, when you said "no I didn't hit them with my ****!" it seemed like you were responding to a question due to the quick edit to that part. If you had established another character earlier on for the questions, and made that a running gag (the interviewer repeatedly asking phallic questions) it would've worked as is. I liked it, just needs work.