Sandbox Gear

Layout is only okay, looking at the pictures I can already tell there are some MAJOR spawn placement problems... Looks pretty bumpy in my opinion. In MLG you definetely need interlocking, it reduces bumps (usually) and prevents lost grenades.

Also, what's with the grav lift towers? Over all, the map needs a lot of work.
Again, all of these conclusions are based off the pictures alone. I don't believe I need to play a game on it to get to the same result.

 

geez i envy you... i cant throw together a map, know its substandard, and just post. Work on it, otherwise no one will d/l it.

interlock and make those towers better, such as make a tube corner facing upwards, then you being pushed onto the top of a block on that corner.

ok, heres forge101 to let you see all techniques, and interlocking for you, incase you didn't know, i saw you're knew

EDIT: woah, just one sec... havent finished yet... a sentence (excluding the hundreds of ellipsis) is not a decent description... work on that also...


but other than that, without the bumps, the map looks decent...

 

No DL, sorry.
Maps like this just waste peoples time.

That's the main reason.

I'm honestly not trying to bash, I'm trying to help you out.
If you made a V.2, with a lot more merging, and fix the flooring.
You'll see a big difference in what people will think of you're map.
1. They will see you took enough time to make it work, and run smooth.
2. They won't criticize on you're map from the way it looks.

An another tip, when taking pictures for your map, just go in to slayer,
and run around for a quick bit. Then go back in to theater mode then take your pics.

Yet again for the members here, they are very up-tight on how maps are posted, or made.
Its not me bashing, its the other people who are on here. : )

I hope to see a V.2, the map wasn't horrible at all.