Purdy lighting, choppy text, minimal effects. Throw some fitting C4D's on that, looks pretty good, but do some more to it.
That spartan in the back is really bothering me because his head is chopped off. You should rotate or skew the stock so that both spartans are in the picture.
lookin good miraj as always... i like it a lot. can u make me a sig? i dont know if you have a shop but yea.
It looks like you actually decreased the quality of the image and then added some horrendous text sorry.
Agreed with Hari Text - Closer to the focal and change that font Lighting - BEAUTIFUL. Quality - What Hari said, plus I do not like what you did to the focal. For me, it would be better if you maintained that clear appearance of the spartan.
On the first one the spartan's head is chopped off and that's annoying. It's cool loking but it doesn't seem to stand out much.