Dust and Echoes: Reborn - Preview #1 - Bridges

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  1. ultsf

    ultsf Ancient
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    So, about a month ago, I tested my map Dust and Echoes. And, I got what all map makers want - feedback. Unfortunately, not much of it was good. And you know what? They were right. It was bumpy, and badly designed and didn't have a flow to it. So, I went back to the beginning and started working on it again.

    Here is what I have so far.

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    Part 1 - Bridges

    Since two of the key parts of this map are parallel bridges, I decided to start over by redesigning the bridges. I went for a look that flowed better (at least, I think they do).

    Now for pictures:
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    This picture shows all the pieces of the bridge put together in a nice little pile. No, this isn't how it started, but, and I advise anyone making a parallel map to do this: Once you get on thing done, make a pile of every piece you need for the other side. That way there is no chance you will run out.

    Now, so that we can compare, here are some before and after pictures: Old Dust and Echoes on top, new on the bottom.

    Full inside view (old)
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    Full inside view (new)
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    Overhead length view (old)
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    Overhead length view (new)
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    Rocket spawn view (from interior - note, rocket is behind and not visible) (old)
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    Rocket spawn view (from interior) (new)
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    Yes, I know that there are some things to work on. The span of the bridge is too open (no cover or obstacles). I'm actually going to wait until I'm done with the map to see what I can put in or not (I'm actually thinking of maybe a roof on the center section).

    And please, if you have any suggestions on weapon placement or what I can use for the a fore mentioned objects in the middle, please post.

    Anyway, I hope you enjoyed this preview (especially those who tested the original).

    Up next is working on the bases. Want a preview?

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  2. cory21

    cory21 Ancient
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    You definitely improved since I saw the previous one. The bridges do look more appealing and will most likely have more capability for fights.

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    This bridge could still use a little improving, since the wedge doesn't really span the whole section fo the bridge.

    Anyways, I'm really looking forward to what you do with this map, I'm sure it will turn out well.
     
  3. ultsf

    ultsf Ancient
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    Um.. that's the old bridge. Old pics are on top, new on the bottom.
     
  4. Spicy Forges

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    This looks really nice so far Ult, the bridge look shexy :p now.
    Seriously though, this map definitely has potential and if you ever need some assistance or advice you know where to find me.
     

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