Something missing?

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  1. Turkey bag56

    Turkey bag56 Ancient
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    I made this image but it just doesn't look right and I don't know why!!!

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    v2
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    v3 (a bit different but looks good right!?!)
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    v4
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    Any idea what I'm missing?
     
    #1 Turkey bag56, Jan 28, 2010
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  2. ..::Brotherston!x

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    Props on what you have, very realistic. Maybe some mountains/hills on the right side?
     
  3. just defy

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    realism... make it more realistic
     
  4. Krazy Kumquat

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    The lines are too consistent, make them more random. Right now it looks like a canyon made of bacon.
     
  5. Turkey bag56

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    Added a mountain and changed the texture a bit.
    I'll fix that when I get time.... FH was down when I made v2 so I couldn't check any posts. :S
     
    #5 Turkey bag56, Jan 29, 2010
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  6. Aschur

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    its too clean to be realistic... in other words, the ground cant be perfectly flat, it needs some vegitation, and obviously the lines in the canyon need variation, and the water needs to look more watery instead of blue.
     
  7. just defy

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    k wait a second. you have signs of erosion due to gravity.... (the shape of the sides of the canyon) but then the horizontal lines. u should totally fix that
     
  8. Krazy Kumquat

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    The lines in the canyon are layers of compacted sediment, and the canyon itself is carved by erosion from the river more than anything.
     
  9. FuriousFilly720

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    Put evil caneval on there. that oughta spice it up!
     
  10. AceOfSpades

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    Cacti and desert shrubbery.
     
  11. Panncakez

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    I think it would look nicer if it had some more shrubbery/cacti, which has been mentioned, but would look a bit more realistic if you added some bumps and holes along the desert. It looks flat... too flat.
     
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    Needs some rock texture on the sides of the canyon.
     
  13. QKT

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    it looks like its missing something because the sand texture is like a pattern repeated over and over and over and over and over and over, so it looks bland and there are no points of interest on the ground. look at some photos of these sort of environments, you'll se that there are bits of the ground that will stand out more than others
     
  14. Turkey bag56

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    Added bumps, changed the texture (land and water) alot and made it uneven.
    I tryed shrubs, plants and cactus but they just didn't seem to fit in with the texture. :(
     
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  15. Matty

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    The shadows are far too harsh. You have to think of this realisticly, the sand is a bright colour, so there will be plenty of light reflected and bouncing around everywhere. The contrast between light and dark will be fairly minimal, and the edges of shadows will be noisy.

    After that, the colours should probably be returned to a more orangy colour, atleast for rockfaces.
     
  16. Panncakez

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    V3 is looking much better, but I agree with Matty that the shadows are too harsh. I thought the water looked better before, too: I think that it could use some waves or reflection-y things.
     
  17. Turkey bag56

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    v4 is up!
    Not much of a change because I didn't have much to work with... Must be just about right with the picture! :D
    -Watter and land texture changed.
    -Everything is now brighter.
    -Shadows are weaker.
    - And lastly, the mountain was moved back slighty.

    Oh yea, I may not be able to upgrade the pic as much because I'm back to school in 2 days. :S
     
    #17 Turkey bag56, Jan 31, 2010
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