three again...I'm not a big fan of any of these either, that seems to be a theme of late. <--I kinda like the dot effect in this one. Will definitely play around with that. <--ugh, just ugh. <--trying a old style, its just as bad as the first time I did that style too.
I like the first one. Nice compo and dots are cool. Couple problems that I see. 1 your depth is weird, why is his forearm/stock of the gun blurred? 2 There is too much of the dot effect on the focal itself. The second I'm not liking too much. The effects are not attractive. The whole thing looks like a mish mash of different stocks. Third one has really nice depth. I like this one. The lighting is just plain bad, though. That's my only qualm with this one. A lot different then what I remembered from you but I like it.
First - Depth is AMAZING for me (contradicting to WHALES' opinion) - Dots are a nice touch Second - Ugh (Basically what WHALES said) Third - The effects are unfitting. - As said before, the lighting is bad.
Why don't you try exploring different styles? Find one that really works well for you. If you still can't find one, then make your own.