Lambeau

Discussion in 'Halo 3 Race Maps' started by cheesenipsaregood, Jan 3, 2010.

  1. cheesenipsaregood

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    Lambeau is my first rollercoaster. It has a 1:45 second lap time and is on the main floor of sandbox

    pics:
    overview
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    start/first turn
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    finish spiral/jump
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    landing/3 turns
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    hill after turns
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    turn after hill
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    another hill, sheild door drop, turn, drop
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    terrain part and climb
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    jump, sheild door bounce, back to beginning
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    http://www.bungie.net/Online/Halo3UserContentDetails.aspx?h3fileid=103763673

    PS: if the description is weird, its because i deleted everything on record ramp to have the guardians blocked
     
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  2. Panncakez

    Panncakez Ancient
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    First off, the pictures are extremely tiny. You could probably fixed it if you used the Photobucket method of embedding pictures, found here.
    Other than that, the coaster looks good, from what I can see. Please enlarge the pictures so I can further elaborate on this comment!

    EDIT: I'll agree with the others below me that if possible, you could make the track wider. Also, just aesthetically, some of the merges could look a little more flowing. The turn in the right of the sixth picture down is what I mean, BTW. Everything still looks fairly well designed, though. Nice job, I hadn't actually seen the note that you wrote that this was your first coaster, lawl.
     
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  3. Devil95

    Devil95 Ancient
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    No Link To Download Dude. The Guy Above already said what i was gonna say. I need bigger pics to comment about this map.

    Edit: Looks fun, tempting like barbarian and Smooth. Jumps and twists. Im gonna download. Looks amazing. Nice Work. 5/5
     
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  4. cheesenipsaregood

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    I tried using imageshack and for some reason they didnt enlarge, ill try photobucket and ill edit this when thats done. Ill also put a download link

    fixed, pics are bigger and there is now a DL link
     
  5. l PATRICK l

    l PATRICK l Ancient
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    i must say, your track is quite thin from the pictures, and im not a fan of falling a couple hundred feet and have to go back to the start. If you look at most tracks they are wider which tends to help having more than just 1-2 people side by side on the track.
     
  6. ExoticallyPure

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    Why did you use record ramp? You know that there's a stickied thread in Halo Forge Maps with all the canvases, right? -.-

    It looks pretty clean to me but I can't tell because you didn't take pictures of the entire map (You're missing the tunnel).
     
  7. cheesenipsaregood

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    the tunnel is only 3 tube pieces to keep you on, you can see it in the overview.

    i know i couldve did that but im almost out of map space

    @l PATRICK l arent all rollercoasters single wide?
    i would put teleporters but im out of money
     

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