First Anime sig // RST

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by RightSideTheory, Jan 3, 2010.

  1. RightSideTheory

    RightSideTheory Legendary
    Forge Critic Senior Member

    Messages:
    7,821
    Likes Received:
    8
    First anime sig. Still in that awkward first stage, where all your first five or so signatures are terrible.

    [​IMG]

    Still have the .xcf, so suggestions on what to do next would be helpful.
     
    #1 RightSideTheory, Jan 3, 2010
    Last edited: Jan 3, 2010
  2. Katanga

    Katanga Ancient
    Senior Member

    Messages:
    1,090
    Likes Received:
    91
    I liek how you used color on the eye to create a focal, but I'm finding the smokey stuff on the left to be too distracting. Maybe blur that a bit more.
     
  3. RightSideTheory

    RightSideTheory Legendary
    Forge Critic Senior Member

    Messages:
    7,821
    Likes Received:
    8
    The C4D?
     
  4. Miraj

    Miraj Ancient
    Senior Member

    Messages:
    1,629
    Likes Received:
    3
    I like the signature.
    It has good flow, depth, and the focal is defined correctly. The replication to the right doesn't work for this signature and is rather distracting. The flame is too much. It does add and help the flow, but the flames towards the left doesn't. The signature also needs a better blending, and a light source. Other than that, great signature.
     
  5. R0FLninja

    R0FLninja Ancient
    Senior Member

    Messages:
    1,269
    Likes Received:
    0
    I don't like how the smokey C4D is kind of covering his neck, it seems like its almost a floating head.

    Perhaps show us a colored version?
     

Share This Page