As some of you may already know, I am making a machinima about a newbish, pink Elite named Logan. I would really like to have some feedback! PROMOTIONAL VIDEO YouTube- Halo 3- The Life of Logan- Promotional Video EPISODE #1 PART 1 YouTube- Halo 3- The Life of Logan- Episode #1: "The Best of the Best" Part 1 of 2 EPISODE #1 PART 1 YouTube- Halo 3- The Life of Logan- Episode #1: "The Best of the Best" Part 2 of 2 I would, obviously, prefer compliments but complaints are fine too. I already know: I should make the voices louder I should make some scenes shorter Please, I can use you guys' help!
I thought it was pretty funny but Fluffball Gato and the #2 guy's voices sounded to much alike so you might wanna work on that a bit. Other than the voice acting, it was very nicely made.
haha i enjoyed that... it would be cool if you made the next episdoe all about the fluffball gato guy tryin to kill him
Nice man, looking forward to seeing more from you. You know you can upload more than 10 minutes if you change your account setting to a directer I believe it is in you acc settings, if you need help doing that just PM me. As stated by you the voices need to be a bit louder and voices a bit more different and scenes need to be a bit longer. You need to add more pet hates and stuff to what Logan does, like looking in the wrong direction when talking or breathing down the mic and stuff -.- Good luck, keep it up