Reach sig attempt

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  1. R0FLninja

    R0FLninja Ancient
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    V1
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    [Thx to Kidbomber for suggesting]

    CNC

    should I get rid of the border?
    Best in FH dark

    Notice How I made it look like he has blood on his knife.
     
    #1 R0FLninja, Dec 17, 2009
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  2. xcoveredingravy

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    I think you did a good job on this. The lighting effects are cool. The only thing I dont like is the cloning because the floating helmet and knife dont look very good. If those were taken out it would make this much better.
     
  3. R0FLninja

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    Ya, this is my first time actualy doing a sig with lighting other than just white, i think the goldish/grayish lighting looks good.

    thanks for the post.
     
  4. Kidbomber

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    Well for one it looks like he is shellshocked or something (Like with seeing multiple things even though its really just one). Not really a fan of the custom background being its really the just the same thing, however it could be fixed but smudging parts of background abit more so the facing aren't to recognizable. The lighting seems out-of-place, and you could have had it somewhere else then where it is (because if i remember right there was no light behind him, so it wouldn't work to well here)

    Hope that helps you on your next sig that you make :)
     
  5. R0FLninja

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    Actualy, Im going to take your smudging advice. Tho the "customized BG" is the product of the gimp seamless effect, the bg without it was just a plain black BG. Although i will take your other advice.

    Thanks KB

    Edit: Following KB's advice:
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  6. KratosAurion777

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    I think the sig needs more contrast. Everything is all a bit blurry, and the colors sort of run together... try sharpening the focal a bit, and possibly darken the background a tad, then increase the contrast. The border is interesting... it has two colors, which looks a tad odd, but you should definitely keep the border. v2 is definitely better than v1 though.
     
  7. R0FLninja

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    I sharpened the face a tad when the lightsource seemed to blur the focal a little, I'll work on that today.

    Thanks
     
  8. Donii

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    I dont like the light source. IT's like, Right on his face.

    Try making it come fro the top.
     
  9. OGRE1 iz Back

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    they are pretty cool
     

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