Outside the Natural Systems

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by Rorak Kuroda, Dec 11, 2009.

  1. Rorak Kuroda

    Rorak Kuroda Up All Night
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    I do a lot of sketches, and decided to share one with you.

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    Comments are always appreciated.
     
  2. ShaddoBlade

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    I have no idea what is going on in this pic, but I like it. And that is the true definition of art, no?
     
  3. Spawn of Saltine

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    I can see one of the ringed planets to the right of it and earth and ( the moon?) far to the right.. so there lies the question, which planet has these weird alien things on it? Btw, you are very good a freehand.
     
  4. Rorak Kuroda

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    Thank you, although my images aren't supposed to have any real "meaning". They are concrete abstracts, which means that although there are definite shapes in the image, they can be interpreted differently.
     
  5. madz333

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    Since we are looking out into space i feel that the background should be black. But that is just my opinion. Also the large "saturn" planet has lines across it and those should be more concentric, they're just a bit off.

    Other than that, it is great and i like it. :) good job
     
  6. xWooden leafx

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    Hmm, sketching a large solid black background seems like it would be hard to work with and looks awkward.
    Nice sketch, I like the shading. You should post more.
     
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  7. Phenomenal

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    The Earth and Moon are a little weird, just not proportionally accurate and don't really fit the picture, but everything else looks awesome. It's very unique and creative.
     
  8. Rorak Kuroda

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    It's not the Earth and Moon, just random planets. I draw what I am feeling, and I was feeling like space that day. But I'll definantly post more. :)
     
  9. Dizfunky

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    IMO the shadows need some work. They shouldn't be as defined.
     
  10. xWooden leafx

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    Same thing I was thinking, I just couldn't put words to it.
     

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