It wasn't "lol", the only thing I liked about it was the angles, they were okay to say the most. The idea itself isn't original, the Microsoft Sam voice is getting really annoying, and the way you kept using such profound language made me shut it off half way through in disgust. -use real voice -have a more original idea -actually have dialoge
I'm assuming that the 'lol' refers to the fact that you put this in the wrong section. Correct? Otherwise, not funny. Try again.
hmm, how to put this...well lets say that comedy machinima isn't you're thing. I would say when making any machinima's in the future use REAL voice actors because the macrosoft voice thing just makes listening to the machinima give me a headache. Watch some other machinima's and pay attenion to the scripts because what you will find that true comedy wont come from making gay elites and putting as much swearing into it as possible. This is an imature attempt at machinima and if you want an audience older than the age of 12 then I suggest following the tips in the and the above comments.