After making my other comic "Steve's Problem", I thought that I should continue creating these comic shorts. I hope that you like it: The Oddballs
I liked it. I think this one is funnier than your other one. I do think it would look better if it was set on Guardian or Heretic though. Probably Guardian because of the scenery. This one is a little bit to plain while the first one on Valhalla had detail to it
I think that Sandtrap is better because it seems like an ancient tomb. The skull looks more like a fossil sitting around, whilst a skull on guardian would look like someone got it knocked off.
I have been making comics weekly now. I have about 5 comics made at the moment. I'll probably show my next one in a few days.
"Dude that's just unsanitary." Another nice one. I definitely like Sandtrap as the environment by the way because it just makes more sense to have a skull there. Hopefully, you keep posting these because it's always fun to take a break from studying for a math test and read them
The "sketch effect" is there to make it look more like something drawn on paper. Otherwise, it is more of a few captions on Halo screenshots instead of a comic.
I liked it! Knock up the saturation a ton though, I'm sure there's so many ways you could make this more "comicy."
Im kinda limited due to "Photoshop.com" because my computer cannot hold Photoshop v7 on it (slow computer, no memory...). I think that the comic is a pale color because it is on Sandtrap. It looks better on other maps, but ill see how it looks with a more saturated look. EDIT: Here is a look with a little saturation boost. Tell me which is better: Saturated: Normal:
I can see a slight increace in the first one, Photobucket has ok effects try turning up the contrast and brightness if you havent already. Oh and about the comic, my favorite part was the end "nahh..."