longslope (working title)

Discussion in 'Halo and Forge Discussion' started by jacster9, Nov 21, 2009.

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Do you like my map so far?

Poll closed Dec 21, 2009.
  1. YES

    11 vote(s)
    84.6%
  2. NO

    2 vote(s)
    15.4%
  1. jacster9

    jacster9 Ancient
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    Hello, jacster9 here

    right now I am working on a longshore racetrack called longslope (working title). I got the idea from Noxiw because he was telling me about a racetrack on longshore. So then I thought I should make a racetrack different then the original sanbox racetracks. Then I thought I should update a map preview for the map. So here you go!

    starting point

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    first slope

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    first turn (hole for theme of map)

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    v i p point

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    so that's so far I have done. I will update every day or so.

    P.S. If anyone is woundering what the things are coming out of the water then they are attacking worms which is supposed to fit the back story of the map.
     
    #1 jacster9, Nov 21, 2009
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  2. Farbeef

    Farbeef Ancient
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    Wow looks really well forged, but not diggin the "worms" to much but besides that looks awsome! A cant wait to se the finished map
     
  3. pyro

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    Its nice but a bit short, and the vip point needs to be set so its faster to go around the track than die and go back.
     
  4. ShaddoBlade

    ShaddoBlade Fuzzy Little Man Peach
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    First off, that checkpoint is cheatable. You'll be able to walk through the left side. You have to use four teleporters to make a double wide destination uncheatable. Otherwise, the track looks smooth so far. I await the final product with great anticipation.
     
  5. MousseMooseROCKS

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    The map looks really interesting and fun, but the first turn looks ever so slightly cramped to me. The worm looks like it's in the way and the shield doors aren't right on the edge.
     
  6. AceOfSpades

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    Double boxes on Longshore, Avalanche, and Blackout are longer than Foundry or Sandbox so it shouldn't be a problem.

    Looks really nice so far. Can't wait to see the finished product.
     
  7. Skisma

    Skisma Creative Force
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    This looks really smooth and fun. I like the worm idea, it's always nice to have a story behind your map. If everyhing continues, this looks like it will turn out great. Keep up the good work.
     
  8. Phenomenal

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    I actually like the worms, obviously your going somewhere with them. As for the map, it looks really smooth so far. I wanna see something really out of the ordinary out of this map though. Do something to blow us forgers away...something unique...
     
  9. masterpete117

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    looks cool so far but mabey u could put some plasma batteries on the track
     
  10. Dangerbeck

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    i really like the way it's going

    it kinda reminds me of those themed hotwheels tracks where the cars ride on the monsters arms and at some point theres a shark head that the cars jump through to the finish. you should do something like that with the worms.

    one problem i see, how do you do more than one lap?or is it just one lap?
     
  11. MousseMooseROCKS

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    It's incomplete.
     

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