Look Both Ways

Discussion in 'Off Topic' started by evilvillager, Nov 8, 2009.

  1. evilvillager

    evilvillager Ancient
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    The sig was really empty at first, so I tried to challenge myself and add in some text.

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    I don't think much of you guys know me, but do you think I'm getting better?

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  2. SmokinWaffle

    SmokinWaffle Ancient
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    Look pretty good, I love the splat of colour on the right.

    Little too much blur/smudge on the shoulders though.
     
  3. evilvillager

    evilvillager Ancient
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    Too much smudging on both shoulders or the Spartan's left shoulder (right side from our view)?
     
  4. Donii

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    Add a little moar depth, Tone down the smudging on the shoulders(Both) and blur them a little. It'll help, imo.
     

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