Sandbox Rectifier

I cant give you feed back on a map without the following

1. Screenshots
2. A brief overview of the map.
3. You must talk about the weapons and vehicals. (Spawn time, types of weapons, locations, etc.)

Sorry, but you need to convince me to download your map. And this does not convince me.

Update:

Well you have screenshots, and I like what I see, plus your weapon and overall description is passable, but needs improvement. 3/5. Plus, put the screenshots in the post so people don't have to leave the site. Now you know for next.

 

You need to embed your pictures into your thread, not link to them. You simply right click on your image, click View image, copy the url, and paste into your thread, with [ img ] [ /img ] tags (without the spaces). No one will comment on your thread unless it's up to standards, and if people after me comment on there being no pics, that will be regarded as spam.


Here, I'll do them for you.

Spoiler

Just because you don't have a Photobucket account doesn't mean you cant create one. In fact, Imageshack doesn't require an account to upload images.

HERE is a link to how to create and use photobucket for Forgehub.

You're welcome.

 

still not right somehow. but looking at the pics that black put up, the map looks interesting. I always love different routes and levels and your interlocking looks pretty clean. you didn't mention if this is your first map, but if it is, it's a really good start.

 

Looks good now, and people we don't need 50 people complaining on the same issue. One's enough.
The interlocking is clean and I like the feel of the map. The grav lift is on instant spawn, right? Just curious.
Can't think of much to say.

 

the inside of the map is very good looking, i like the feel of it. The outside though i think is another story, i would have tried to make it smaller and then making the main building a little better looking on the outside. Also this might just be me, but i think you should either have blue columns and blue lights, or red columns and red lights, not one of each. Either way though, if this is your first, or one of your first maps it is very good, it could just use a few improvements

 

well, before you even tread that route, i suggest setting up a game with the Tester's Guild. If there are any problems with your map, they'll find 'em and let you know. It's a great way to improve your map.

When you think your map is good enough for matchmaking, join Atlas on Bungie.net and post it there. Good luck.

 

One thing I would advise you to do is take any screenshots of your map in customs - that way you won't be able to see any of the annoying blue lines. Generally, people are more likely to download a map if the post is professional, so it's always something worth doing.

 

I broke the map. It's pretty easy actually. Outside edges are a bit sloppy, but I LOVE the inside. I would like to see a v2 plz. And if you're not quite up to it, I'd even help.

EDIT: Your mom's my rectifier. *snickers

 

The map looks okay, but it could use a lot of smoothing out. Bumps on the pathway can nock peoples strafe off and it just doesnt make the map look like it had effort put into it, it will look like, 4 floors for example ;p

So yeah I recommend fixing the little bumps, however I do like the stair structure with the red columns in, there quite nice.