hmm lets see.. first off, the focal is too far to the right.. it would work there, except that the sig is too wide for it. like the text, though it is pretty big and shows up alot more than it should. the thing that looks weirdest for me though is the guy's hair. it is smudged or something and looks really weird (especially on fh white) so basically work on blending, creating a good background, and keep at the pop out stuff.. its fun!
Yea, his hair was smudged, and he has a TON of gradients over him, The original render was really bright so i had to work with it a lot to get it to blend. So I ended up throwing tons of gradients over him and had to smudge a lot because of him looking pixelated at the end of it =/ And yea, I guess he is a little too far over, and i've never been great with text. Too bad I didn't save an XCF of this, I'd love to try it again without redo-ing the whole process XD