Mashup

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  1. Huntar

    Huntar Ancient
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    A halo 3 Mashup, no clue what i was going for, just random ideas in the head put into photoshop. Hope to start a new Mashup series :3 I wasnt really trying to achieve anything, IMO i think it looks bad. Just messing around tho :p

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  2. Mace

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    While the idea is great, its poorly done. Choose one focal, such as the master chief TV, then build around it with random images.
     
  3. RaBBiiTTT

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    Text is a bit hard to read.
    The brush in the lower right does not look good IMO.

    and what mace said.
     
  4. Knight Kninja

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    agreed with mace on the focal point..

    i do kinda like it though, but i dont really like the stock used.. it looks meh... maybe just overused.

    the text is hard to read, but other than that i like the idea and everything.. i cant wait to see the new stuff that you will do with this
     
  5. M.Jelleh

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    Get rid of splotch in lower left hand corner.
    Change font on "Mashup".
    Experiment with the flow because it's all ****ed up right now.
     
  6. Huntar

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    Ahhh but the whole purpose is to be ****ed up.


    But thanks for the CnC's guys, will work on it.
     

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